Chapter 2 » Ninety Eight

Ah, another close up of the eyes, but when I sketched it out it looked cool so I went with it. I wrote this scene months ago and find myself re-writing it as I go along. It’s good to be flexible though.

Here’s a question for the regulars. What do you think about the cursing? I find myself torn. I think it works for the story, being more adult oriented, yet you never know when a young person might come upon this and I’d hate to be the one who teaches such language to kids. So if you have an opinion please sound off in the shout box. Thanks.

Oh, and if you’re an artist and want to get a good education on serious perspective you should download the perspective videos at ConceptArt.org. I bought them this weekend and I will probably wear them out over time watching them regularly to get a better grip on perspective.