I was hoping to do a little more for today’s update but alas there was no time. I’m not sure how well this reads either. That blob on Dean’s back in the right panel is the shadow cast by somebody’s head. Maybe I should raise it up a bit and include the shoulders. I am working a bit ahead with the script and trying to compress it somewhat so that there is more bang for the proverbial buck.

Right now I’m reading Velocity by Dean Koontz. Pretty good so far and after that I have V for Vendetta lined up. Watchmen made me long to read more Alan Moore creations.

UPDATE: Changed the shadow and Dean walking in the left frame. Much happier with them both. Reminds me of something in one of Andrew Loomis’ books that says an artist should always be willing to erase something and draw it again.